Esther Sylvester

Hey TIM! Clever username; I like it a lot. Everyone has greeted you already but I decided to say hello anyway! So welcome to YWS. It's really fun here, and ...

Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions at all, please Private Message me. (PM) I'll do my best to answer any questions you ask. French is one of my ...

Welcome to YWS! This place is great, I assure you. So you like science, do you ya? It's cool that you have strong interests. Science isn't exactly my forte, but ...

Hi, I am Esther! Pleased to meet you! You've picked the right site to join. Everyone here is very nice and helpful. If you have any questions just Private Message ...

Hi there! REVIEW: Aw, this was short! I was wanting more. :( Next time, if this is a chapter for a novel, make the chapters longer. If this is a ...

Hello! I am Esther and I will be reviewing you today. (since you said this is an essay, I will review it as such, not a book report.) Ah, the ...

Hi! So this was a solid piece-good job! Some of the descriptions were really great. I think the biggest problem for me was the transition here: As the curtains rolled ...

Hey Austenite! You don't mind if I review this, do you? I'll make it short I promise! Just a check here: Is this a James Bond novel? It seems to ...

Hey, I am Esther. Let's review this thing! (I will be reviewing this as a short story because you didn't say otherwise.) So I liked this. It wasn't too showy ...

Welcome to YWS! Be careful or I might start to call you Brandy. :o With that aside, I hope you come to enjoy this site as much as I have. ...

Hey, there! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today! Don't scrap it! The worst you can do to your written pieces is scrap them. If anything "failed" pieces ...

Best friend emailing my secrets. I have nothing bad to hide, and knowing that about my "parents" would just be plain creepy. If you were dying of thirst, would you ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! I'm Esther, pleased to meet you. I think your name is pretty cool, actually! I've never heard it before, but it has a nice ring to ...

Hi! I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. Very, very good job. Since this is in the short story section, I am going to assume this is the ...

Hey! This was lovely. You captured the internal conflict of Rosaline wonderfully. I have read many shakespeare plays but I have never read Romeo and Juliet, so I wasn't too ...